My story: "Who understands?"
And this is the short story (eg q .. I think I went too short) for the q story contest spoken to in the last post! :) Do not know if I'm right or wrong, I'm not a literary critic, what I can say is, q is satisfied with my work, I liked my story and I'm happy and proud for having entered the contest! : D If you dare to read, ojala q like it! : D
are voting will not be the official, as there is a "jury" (and the whole thing to choose the winner: P) but if you liked my story and want to shop around to give me a vote (in the column left, thank you very much in advance: P) Here is the link if they want to shop around: http://historiaparaunfinal.blogspot.com/ Ahhh
and a special thanks to my friend
RB: D who I echo many flowers, many clubs, and had some very nice comments about my work! Friend, thank you very much to heart: ') meant a lot all the things you said q;)
"Who understands?"
My name is François ... and hear "what moniker!" I do not know where my parents were thinking when they chose that name for me! He was allegedly named after a doctor who did social service community back in the days when I was born. Worse, with the adventures of life, I discovered that I have a name not only foreign, European, to be exact, but the spelling is absolutely wrong ... BFFF or talk!
Upon hearing my name many would believe that I am a type of those from whom you see in movies or novels, tall, muscular, blue eyes and güerejo like the sun, to the disappointment of many (especially the girl) not I am neither tall nor blue eye, much less color sun, tell you that my nickname in school was "coal" haha. I was born in humble birth, and being the eldest of 6, do not think I could play with a lot or aspire to much, after all, since I have reason, I always had to work hard next to my parents, in the small garden that had to help support the family.
my father's priority was education, he was convinced that this was the key to escape poverty in which we lived, so much sacrifice we sent my brothers and me to school. I really enjoyed my studies, though I must confess that sometimes I felt guilty for spending so many hours in class, and not helping my parents, knowing well that a few extra hands could mean a little more money for the house ...
I never thought I could get past the primary, however, my father, as he could, sent me to school ... To me that was like a dream, I, in high school ¿?! I would have thought or the craziest of dreams! Teachers there loved me and appreciated me, saying they had "potential" is not exactly the word I would use to describe myself, would rather say that I wanted ... to learn, to do a good job, and somehow repay the enormous efforts of my father ...
When I finished my studies to earn a scholarship, all expenses paid to go to high school study in a famous private school in the capital, could not believe my good fortune, had he won the lottery or what ... My parents did not fit the pride and happiness They were the first to push me to accept and go away, I refused because I knew they would need more to your side, keeping me away from studying, however, in the end I accepted.
Life at school was privileged to me, never had much in my life, books, computer access, internet, telephone, libraries, newspaper, books, so I promised myself that if life was giving me the privilege to have all that, I would pay to give the 10000% of my effort and work, as my father did at work every day, from sunrise to sunset in our little garden.
had very little time for that to my teammates called social life also did not have many guys, not to mention the girls. Wow that was pretty girls at the school, some very fine, classy, \u200b\u200bother cats dressed in silk, after all, everywhere was "cooked" beans as my father. In all, there was a special calling to me in care, it was all a dream, a girl is not very high, with a figure of a goddess, with brown hair, long, very smart and intelligent. Pearl was his name, say, at that time never fixed on me and if he did, he pretended that I did not know ... My classmates made fun of me for the simple fact interested in it, said we were of different levels, different worlds, "Uyyy coal, forget, that girl is not for you buddy, do not waste your time" they said. At first I decided not to hear stupid comments, but then I realized they were right, so I preferred to forget the girls to completely devote to studies, very difficult thing to do, considering that the hormones, and nature does not think head, but ... with ... well, you know how we operate our men!
At that time I thought a lot Xochitl, I talked about it? ... she was my playmate of children, we met almost almost from under our feet this world, was my neighbor, my partner class, pff so many things we share, however, our relationship changed when school started, I think that after so many hours of play, she mistook the laughter, and mischief, with "love" or something, however my part to her there was this feeling, which requires that it distanced me .... I think that's exactly why my thoughts flew to her when my attempts to woo the girl of most dreams were frustrated .... "I would certainly Xóchitl if entry" was what usually happened in my head ....
Anyway, my high school stage is marked by good grades, for tests on a new world for me But a total failure with the opposite sex! The successful study was rewarded with a new college scholarship, in the same private school! I chose the career in chemistry, simply because it is the future, everything is in chemistry, food, pharmaceutical, automotive, cosmetic, plastic, and everywhere else you turn, the chemical is present! What I can tell? I was not wrong in the election!
My teachers repeated the word he had heard a few years ago, said he had "potential", so many inviting me to participate in extracurricular activities, many others offered me the opportunity to assist in experiments, studies, research ... which helped not only my student life, but starting a career, so doubtless accepted as long as my classes and schedule permitting ...
There was a particular experiment that changed my life. A teacher invited me to assist him in developing a formula for a chocolate without calories. Terrible idea ... if we could get would be a resounding success that we hoped ... What do you think? We did it! After many hours of experimental work, sleepless nights, gave the nail, and we get a completely healthy chocolate full of antioxidants, and no calories! I do not need to say that the success of the night came in the morning, we began distributing our product within the campus, then our market was opened to the entire city in a short time at the national level, and within a very short time we we threw the international market! Switzerland, as the main buyer of our product!
My life, although it had already changed dramatically, this stroke of luck (or rather of so much work) and this entry so unexpected money to achieve a 180 degree turn in my life and those around me. My parents live happily in a decent home, great, no more worries, and the garden with my mother always dreamed of, my little brothers now enjoy many things that were denied during that time we lived in poverty, send them to the best schools, and its future is bright as they may sound to eat the world if this is what they want.
The most noticeable change was the female, before or tossing me see, now, without even offering me I was looking for more, finally managed to conquer the Pearl! At first he was aware that she had approached me for reasons beyond the physical and emotional, however, was convinced that my love achieved by her love, and do that was by my side for the right reasons ,.... sadly for me, after a time to be at his side, I realized that my love and my heart meant nothing to her and her "love" had a price: everything that my wallet could buy ... Take the painful decision to give up, give it up, and do not buy more that love did not exist, after all, it was time to settle down with someone who corresponded my feelings and that was by my side for more than my growing fortune .... It was hard for me to conclude that he must return to my roots and go for Xochitl Xochitl by me ....
Xochitl
still not be the woman of my dreams was not the most beautiful in the world, but what the heck, I'm not exactly umm .... the guy that the Titanic had not lived with her for about 10 years, but she loved me, with a sincere love, long before I be the employer, the successful chemical and man of money in which I had become , she knew as well as the palm of your hand, I had seen mourn for the palette that I had not been able to buy, I had seen him fall, I had been patched dress pants that were my only decent possession to go to school, and even with all that, I had wanted, I had sounded, and wanted to be my girlfriend ... Who could be better candidate than her to become the companion of my life? ... Without more, I dove into jewelry, Pearl's favorite course, and got a diamond ring, so beautiful that surely melt the heart of my Xochitl, with a bouquet of red roses in hand, went straight to your door!
undoubtedly surprised her, evidently not expecting nor my visit, nor imagined the reason for my presence, unfortunately, I think you miss to get the best, maybe he was in "their day", because neither time saying a word, when he took the field and started beating him:
- "Y tu who you think you are or, what right you think you have to get to my door with beautiful roses?, you think that buying with my heart? why do not you come back with rich bitches that you love? idea how many times you've broken my heart?, how many times did my heart and broke it into pieces when you ignored me at school when he rejected my love? think you now have your millions just like you come to my door and forget to think that all of your betrayal? have any idea how much I hurt you somewhere away from me, without your coming to see me even once? you imagine how much it hurt to see you with these gals rich and not once you remember me? now what you think you have right of return as if nothing had happened?! Nooo! I have my heart, but most of my dignity, if my dignity, and that is not for sale, go back where you came from, and returns with "your kind" will not let you hurt me again "
.... Pfff ... Go with the genius of my Xochitl! If you do not want ... bad, if you want them bad ... I understand the mysteries of chemistry, business, money, but what happens?? with women?? Why us crazy, we despair and make us love them or hate them so much? "" Who understands women ????... My Xochitl Xochitl dear ... and ¿ think with that speech yours you'll get rid of me? Haha now you because you conquered conquered sickly ....
- "And now you let me talk or continue to hit me with what you have left the industry ?"...
- "Do not make me laugh ... I'm out right now .... ahhh ... but only one more thing .... I took
cheeks, put his face close to mine slowly, and gave me a sharp look and deep, so long they seem to have nothing else to do the next fifteen years and quietly told me that four words are etched in the depths of my memory - fuck your mother! -